I commented at MMH, but i'll also comment and rate here.
Good things: It's a long mission, so it takes a while to finish, which is good. The AI is placed well and they have nice waypoint timing. Trees are placed pretty well, and they look good.
Things to work on: The longivity was good, but it is a long mission with short burst of fighting, which can be boring if you don't like a big rest. Decorations are sparse, besides sand bunkers and med helpers. AI is placed well, but the mission is fairly easy, try adding more. There weren't many sounds unless someone died.